Post #4 (make sure it's a new post)

Post #4, Revision of “Integrating Voice in Expository Writing(?)”

For this assignment, you will revise your developing draft of “Integrating Voice in Expository Writing(?)”, i.e. Post #3. With all the materials from the Writing Groups/Peer Review, and your experience with this unit, you now have a unique task ahead of you.

We’ve reviewed and criticized the use of first-person narrative in expository writing for the last week and discussed its placement/misplacement in this genre of writing. Now that you’ve had the opportunity to experiment with this manipulation of tone, it’s up to you to decide whether it has value in relationship to your most recent writing assignment.

Without significantly changing content, revise Post #3 focusing on style and tone to make your text more effective overall.

·         You may choose to commit to the same style and voice of Post #3, or you may decide to alter your text’s tone by omitting first-person perspective.

What do you need to do to make this more effective, appealing and appropriate to your audience?  

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Due Date: Post to your Student Blog by 12:30pm, Monday, October 31^st 

 Requirements: 750-1000 Words,

AND please COMMENT on (2) student blogs to help facilitate the revision process (by Friday, October 28^th)